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 Undestanding particle transport, bridging and in general clogging phenomena is critical for the effective use and management of subsurface
 reservoirs.
 The tiniest changes can alter the established path in a porous geometry and transport behaviour over time.
-Thus, the behaviour of individual particles in Stokes Flow form the 
-For the understanding of porous media, where particle transport, bridging and clogging phenomena are critical to the use of subsurface
-reservoirs. Be it either for carbohydrate resource recovery or storage of CO2. Understanding the behaviour of particles in Stokes flow
-is key to analyzing more complex phenomena emerging over time such as permeability reduction over periods of time.\
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-The study of the Stokes Flow has a long history, beginning with Stokes' solution flow along a sphere@stokes1851.\
-Subsequent work expanded to explore a multitude of shapes and the interaction of multiple particles.
-More recently, research was performed in the understanding of creeping flow which are essential in water treatment, carbohydrate recovery
-and CO2 storage. // CITE
+Thus, the behaviour of individual particles in Stokes Flow form the foundation upon which complex processes such as particle accumulation
+in porous structures.
+
+The study of the Stokes Flow has a long history, beginning with Stokes' study of flow past a rigid sphere@stokes1851.\
+Subsequent work expanded his work to include a multitude of shapes and the interaction of multiple particles, different geometries and
+boundary other conditions.
+More recently, research was performed in the understanding of creeping flow, the particle transport and the clogging associated with it, and how those microscopic properties impact the macroscopic development. These carry implications which are essential in water treatment, medicine,
+carbohydrate recovery and CO2 storage. // CITE
 
 This report delves into the central aspects governing the known behaviour past single and multiple spheres.
 Explores the effect of it in porous media and examines the more recent particle bridging behaviour found in porous structures.